Category: Project-1

This week I’ve been tweaking the whole film to make changes.

I also thought about the whole story. It is true, as my friends say, that my stories are too long and difficult to finish. After ten weeks of lessons, I realised that there were a lot of boring storylines in my original design and I think I need to adjust and improve the script. I also tried to adjust the gender of the characters in the story, as an all male story is a bit monotonous after all. I changed the original boy to a girl and redesigned his look.

This week George suggested I adjust the pacing of the end credits, and this sudden butterfly rise was a bit odd. There was no need to show too much of it. So I went for a different way of ending the film.

I took George’s advice and changed some of the shots and movements. I have also added some endings that I have just finished.

I also drew some character styles.

After much consideration, I have changed the ending of my story. There is a final battle when the story of the protagonist’s past is known.

I took a lot of Chinese fighting style references and added weapons and bare-handed fighting sections. However, given the time and difficulty of the final production, I designed the actual fight to be relatively short, around 30 seconds. In the end I gave the main character a redemption by sacrificing himself.